Two poems I wrote, feedback appreciated
Simply put, just two poems I wrote while in the train.
Tell me what you think.
That's deep. I loved your poems hun. I loved the way you've worded them.. so true!
Perfect Wolfguy.. Thanks for sharing with us and please keep them coming
Writing is a good outlet. I love how you added the pictures.. creative. I like them.
Sam j
Both are fantastic, and beautifully written. I can definitely relate. I always admire someone who can put what some of us have felt into words so perfectly. Thanks for sharing your talent.
You remind me alot about myself with how deep poetry goes on an emotional level. They are really good Don't ever put yourself down:)
loved em keep writing you express so well
Beautifully written! Thanks for the sharing!
Well in style and wording, both deep and clearly expressed!